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 ## Keeping Zulip 100% open source
 
-Many modern “open-source” companies use an intentionally crippled “open-source”
-version as a demo for their non-open-source paid product. In contrast, we are
-committed to keeping Zulip [100% open
+Many modern “open-source” companies use a version of their product with some
+basic functionality intentionally removed as a demo for their non-open-source
+paid product. In contrast, we are committed to keeping Zulip [100% open
 source](https://github.com/zulip/zulip#readme).
 
 When you [self-host Zulip](/self-hosting/), you get all the